Sunday, December 2, 2007

Persuasive Essay-My Essay On Why The All Blacks Shouldn't Be Fired


WHY THE ALL BLACKS COACHES
SHOULD KEEP THEIR JOBS

The full time whistle blows and this is a shocker, the All Blacks have lost the quarter final game against France and they are out of the world cup.
Intro, Final & Rugby

Dear New Zealand Rugby Federation,
I’m Elsie & I am writing to you to give my opinion about the All Blacks Coaches getting fired. One man bet 5.8 Million on the All Blacks winning the game and part of that is probably because they know the coaches have amazing skill. I think it’s bizarre that after one game they get fired. I mean I know it’s the world cup but still it’s a couple of jobs gone. I bet the coaches are devastated that they have now lost their jobs as rugby coaches to one of the best New Zealand Teams.
Opinion, First Subject/Segment/Opinion

The All Blacks have come this far in the world cup with the same coaches every game. In four years time we might not have all the players that we do now and we most definitely won’t have the same coaches next year for example Graham Henry has been a coach for at least one year and a great one at that.
Coaches, Irritating

Since France won the quarter-final everyone has been suspicious that the Ref wasn’t being as fair as he could have. Some people are even saying that he was the reason that the All Blacks lost and have evened rumoured that he was only 24 even if he wasn’t he still was being un-fair.
Ref, Fair


So I think that the coaches should stay because:
-They have been with us for a while
-They are great to the team
-Have trained them well to come this far.
Reasons

So listen to me please don’t fire the All Blacks coaches
because they have trained the All Blacks very well I mean look at
where they are now.

Elsie

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