Elsie's Reflection On 2007

Here's My Reflection On 2007 Check It Out On You
Tube & The Team 14 Blog As Well Here's The Link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UeD1Vt7Z62I

And Here It Is:

My Inquiry Evaluation

I Think Our Team (Elsie, Penny, Anna & Emma) Did Really
Well We Worked Well Together But We Got A Bit Stressed
Out With The Filming We Were Having Teacnical Difficulties
But We Got There And It Was Fun Creating A Movie Together
But We Still Need To Do A Bit More Editing.

Next Steps:
Maybe Next Time We Could Be A Bit More Organised
Because We Went To Go Get Started With Filming And We
Didn't Even Know How To Work The Camera And It Wasn't
Even Charged So We Need To Be More Organised Next Time

Team Work:
Again I Think We Worked Well As A Team But We
Need To Learn To Just Keep It Simple Because
We Got Stressed Out With The Fact That We Had Put
All Our Costumes And We Couldn't End Up Filming!

So That's How Our Inquiry Went!
By Elsie

My Essay Evaluation

I think my essay was well written but it was a bit un-polished and it could use a bit more work because it was a bit repetative like it had quite a lot of the same sentence starters so it was good but it can use a bit more work so i'll do a bit more work on that

Persuasive Essay-My Essay On Why The All Blacks Shouldn't Be Fired

WHY THE ALL BLACKS COACHES
SHOULD KEEP THEIR JOBS

The full time whistle blows and this is a shocker, the All Blacks have lost the quarter final game against France and they are out of the world cup.
Intro, Final & Rugby

Dear New Zealand Rugby Federation,
I’m Elsie & I am writing to you to give my opinion about the All Blacks Coaches getting fired. One man bet 5.8 Million on the All Blacks winning the game and part of that is probably because they know the coaches have amazing skill. I think it’s bizarre that after one game they get fired. I mean I know it’s the world cup but still it’s a couple of jobs gone. I bet the coaches are devastated that they have now lost their jobs as rugby coaches to one of the best New Zealand Teams.
Opinion, First Subject/Segment/Opinion

The All Blacks have come this far in the world cup with the same coaches every game. In four years time we might not have all the players that we do now and we most definitely won’t have the same coaches next year for example Graham Henry has been a coach for at least one year and a great one at that.
Coaches, Irritating

Since France won the quarter-final everyone has been suspicious that the Ref wasn’t being as fair as he could have. Some people are even saying that he was the reason that the All Blacks lost and have evened rumoured that he was only 24 even if he wasn’t he still was being un-fair.
Ref, Fair


So I think that the coaches should stay because:
-They have been with us for a while
-They are great to the team
-Have trained them well to come this far.
Reasons

So listen to me please don’t fire the All Blacks coaches
because they have trained the All Blacks very well I mean look at
where they are now.

Elsie