Here's My Reflection On 2007 Check It Out On You
Tube & The Team 14 Blog As Well Here's The Link
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UeD1Vt7Z62I
And Here It Is:
Monday, December 17, 2007
Tuesday, December 11, 2007
My Inquiry Evaluation
I Think Our Team (Elsie, Penny, Anna & Emma) Did Really
Well We Worked Well Together But We Got A Bit Stressed
Out With The Filming We Were Having Teacnical Difficulties
But We Got There And It Was Fun Creating A Movie Together
But We Still Need To Do A Bit More Editing.
Next Steps:
Maybe Next Time We Could Be A Bit More Organised
Because We Went To Go Get Started With Filming And We
Didn't Even Know How To Work The Camera And It Wasn't
Even Charged So We Need To Be More Organised Next Time
Team Work:
Again I Think We Worked Well As A Team But We
Need To Learn To Just Keep It Simple Because
We Got Stressed Out With The Fact That We Had Put
All Our Costumes And We Couldn't End Up Filming!
So That's How Our Inquiry Went!
By Elsie
Well We Worked Well Together But We Got A Bit Stressed
Out With The Filming We Were Having Teacnical Difficulties
But We Got There And It Was Fun Creating A Movie Together
But We Still Need To Do A Bit More Editing.
Next Steps:
Maybe Next Time We Could Be A Bit More Organised
Because We Went To Go Get Started With Filming And We
Didn't Even Know How To Work The Camera And It Wasn't
Even Charged So We Need To Be More Organised Next Time
Team Work:
Again I Think We Worked Well As A Team But We
Need To Learn To Just Keep It Simple Because
We Got Stressed Out With The Fact That We Had Put
All Our Costumes And We Couldn't End Up Filming!
So That's How Our Inquiry Went!
By Elsie
Sunday, December 2, 2007
My Essay Evaluation
I think my essay was well written but it was a bit un-polished and it could use a bit more work because it was a bit repetative like it had quite a lot of the same sentence starters so it was good but it can use a bit more work so i'll do a bit more work on that
Persuasive Essay-My Essay On Why The All Blacks Shouldn't Be Fired

WHY THE ALL BLACKS COACHES
SHOULD KEEP THEIR JOBS
The full time whistle blows and this is a shocker, the All Blacks have lost the quarter final game against France and they are out of the world cup.
Intro, Final & Rugby
Dear New Zealand Rugby Federation,
I’m Elsie & I am writing to you to give my opinion about the All Blacks Coaches getting fired. One man bet 5.8 Million on the All Blacks winning the game and part of that is probably because they know the coaches have amazing skill. I think it’s bizarre that after one game they get fired. I mean I know it’s the world cup but still it’s a couple of jobs gone. I bet the coaches are devastated that they have now lost their jobs as rugby coaches to one of the best New Zealand Teams.
Opinion, First Subject/Segment/Opinion
The All Blacks have come this far in the world cup with the same coaches every game. In four years time we might not have all the players that we do now and we most definitely won’t have the same coaches next year for example Graham Henry has been a coach for at least one year and a great one at that.
Coaches, Irritating
Since France won the quarter-final everyone has been suspicious that the Ref wasn’t being as fair as he could have. Some people are even saying that he was the reason that the All Blacks lost and have evened rumoured that he was only 24 even if he wasn’t he still was being un-fair.
Ref, Fair
So I think that the coaches should stay because:
-They have been with us for a while
-They are great to the team
-Have trained them well to come this far.
Reasons
So listen to me please don’t fire the All Blacks coaches
because they have trained the All Blacks very well I mean look at
where they are now.
Elsie
Sunday, November 4, 2007
Key comps reflection-draft
THINGS THAT HAVE MADE PROGRESS IN THIS YEAR:
ATRIBUTES I HAVE SHOWN PRORESS IN:
-ACTIVE LISTENING
I Have Learned To Really Consintrate On The Person I'm Listening.
-RELAXED UNDER PRESSURE
I Have Realised That I Wok Better When I Have A Time Limit Because I'm Determined To Finish The Work Because If I Don't I Slack Off.
-GOAL SETTER
I Have Improved On My Goal Setting Because I Am Setting More Challenging And That Are Harder For Me To Complete.
-SELF MOTIVATED
I Have Improved On My Self Motivation Because I Have Really Learned That Self Motivation Is Motiation It's Self.
-SELF RESPONSIBLE
I Have Definitely Become More Self Responsible & Have Taken My Actions Seriously And Have Taken Them Extra Seriously When There The Wrong Choice.
-AROHA
I Have Learned To Care About They Other People Around Me And They Will Give Care Back
-RESPECTFUL.
I Have Learned As A Yr 6 That Were Role Models So We Need To Show Respect To The Others And The School Environment.
-CREATOR
I've Become More Creative This Year I Think The Wearable Arts Helped And I Started Doing An After School Art Class.
ATRIBUTES I NEED A BIT OF WORK ON:
-FLEXIBLE
I Think I Need To Become More Flexible With My Work And Homework.
-SOCIAL STUDIES/HEALTH/P.E
Next Year I Would Like To Come In The Top 25 People In The Cross Countrey
And I Need To Start Focusing On It.
Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Term 4 Goals
Personnel Goals:1.For my personnel goal
This includes school aswell
Is to be more self confident
because I have been saying things
like "oh i'm not going to make it"
and I did so that's my personnel goal
and I think it's important
to have self confident.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will probably get better at things
that i'm not good at becauase of
the things i have been saying so
if I had not said those things
I would probably be better at them so
if you say i'm not going to make
it you won't but if you say you will you will.
This includes school aswell
Is to be more self confident
because I have been saying things
like "oh i'm not going to make it"
and I did so that's my personnel goal
and I think it's important
to have self confident.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will probably get better at things
that i'm not good at becauase of
the things i have been saying so
if I had not said those things
I would probably be better at them so
if you say i'm not going to make
it you won't but if you say you will you will.
Term 4 Goals
School Goals:2.Because it's my last term at
primary school I want it to be
the best so to do that I am going
to get involved in everything I can
like receptionist mediators and
things like that.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will have badges and some sort of
visual proof
primary school I want it to be
the best so to do that I am going
to get involved in everything I can
like receptionist mediators and
things like that.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will have badges and some sort of
visual proof
Term 4 Goals
School Goals:1.This term I want to try really
hard to not but in while someone
else is talking because I seem
to be doing that a lot so that's
one of my school goals.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will think before i talk
so I can make sure no one else is
hard to not but in while someone
else is talking because I seem
to be doing that a lot so that's
one of my school goals.
How Will I Achieve This?
I will think before i talk
so I can make sure no one else is
Tuesday, October 23, 2007
My Refletion Learning
Today I Learned:
That I am far better @ gym than i thought
im got 6 4's
Because Of This Learning I Can Now:
Get Good Marks & have
a better time @ gym because I know
I can do ot but i just need to focus!
The Next Step In My Learning Is:
To get back into doing gym
That I am far better @ gym than i thought
im got 6 4's
Because Of This Learning I Can Now:
Get Good Marks & have
a better time @ gym because I know
I can do ot but i just need to focus!
The Next Step In My Learning Is:
To get back into doing gym
Sunday, October 7, 2007
Feedback on Term 3 Speech - Bad Habits
3.18 Great intro using example of someone's reaction which grabbed our attention. Clear voice. Gave lots of examples of bad habits. Great eye contact. Summary gave an overview of speech.
Next Steps:
Using gestures more. Possibly slow down a little.
Next Steps:
Using gestures more. Possibly slow down a little.
Tuesday, September 18, 2007
Refelction
Today I Learned:
How To Do Square Routs in maths
Because Of This Learning I Can Now:
Do Them When I get to intermidiate
The Next Step in my learning is:
To learn how 2 do square routs with 2's beside them
How To Do Square Routs in maths
Because Of This Learning I Can Now:
Do Them When I get to intermidiate
The Next Step in my learning is:
To learn how 2 do square routs with 2's beside them
Speech Reflection
On the 10th of september I presented my spech on bad habits to Rm 14.
I think I presented it in a loud lear voice and everyone was laughing and
gasping at the facts so the class liked it but I thought that I didn't really use
my normal voice because i was so nearvous I was only the 2nd person in
the whole class and they students in the class voted my score 24 out of 25.
So I think I did an ok job on my speech but next time I would like to
practise a bit more so I'm not as nearvous.
I think I presented it in a loud lear voice and everyone was laughing and
gasping at the facts so the class liked it but I thought that I didn't really use
my normal voice because i was so nearvous I was only the 2nd person in
the whole class and they students in the class voted my score 24 out of 25.
So I think I did an ok job on my speech but next time I would like to
practise a bit more so I'm not as nearvous.
Wednesday, September 5, 2007
Firstclass-Reflection
I think that some of us are using them really well for booking and
school projects but then others are using them for instant
messaging all the time and are not using them for the right reasons.
But what some people don't know is that the teachers get all the e-mails
but people are just doing e-mails like hi and they send it to everyone!
school projects but then others are using them for instant
messaging all the time and are not using them for the right reasons.
But what some people don't know is that the teachers get all the e-mails
but people are just doing e-mails like hi and they send it to everyone!
Thursday, August 2, 2007
S.L.C-Reflection
I Think My Student led conference went rather well
because my parents were amused throughout the
whole thing and they were asking lots of useful questions
and they were very interested in everything I was saying.
They especially enjoyed the visual Thesaurus and mum
would like to us it more often at home.
(I Recorded Feedback On Postits)
because my parents were amused throughout the
whole thing and they were asking lots of useful questions
and they were very interested in everything I was saying.
They especially enjoyed the visual Thesaurus and mum
would like to us it more often at home.
(I Recorded Feedback On Postits)
Monday, July 30, 2007
Reflection On Diference
Q.How Do I Treat People
From Different Cultures?
A.I treat them like anyone
else because they are.
Q.How are people from
different cultures the same?
A.They just look different on the
outside and maybe a different language
maybe but they are completely the same
on the inside.
Q.How can we make new
people feel welcome?
A.We just treat them the same
and of course the commen scence
qoute "treat others the way you want to be
treated"
Q.What might I (have) Done /do
that makes people feel different?
A.Maybe Sometimes when people that are from
a different culture are standing beside someone
who just got invited to their house or to a
birthday party and they feel a bit left out and
then that might make them feel different.
From Different Cultures?
A.I treat them like anyone
else because they are.
Q.How are people from
different cultures the same?
A.They just look different on the
outside and maybe a different language
maybe but they are completely the same
on the inside.
Q.How can we make new
people feel welcome?
A.We just treat them the same
and of course the commen scence
qoute "treat others the way you want to be
treated"
Q.What might I (have) Done /do
that makes people feel different?
A.Maybe Sometimes when people that are from
a different culture are standing beside someone
who just got invited to their house or to a
birthday party and they feel a bit left out and
then that might make them feel different.
Monday, July 23, 2007
Letter-Tania
168 Clyde Road
Fendalton 8052
Christchurch
19th July, 2007
Dear Tania,
I am Elsie from Fendalton Open Air Primary School
And I read the busker and I really think you need a reality check you’re not the queen of England if you were you wouldn’t be here.
You are going to miss out on a great boy and you won’t realise because you didn’t give him a chance.
You only care about going out in taxis and getting manicures.
You should start treating people the way you want to be treated because at this point I agree with the boy in the story go jump in a lake. Maybe next time you should talk to him first because you might actually like them and if they can’t afford to take you out in taxi’s then that’s your loss!!!!
I have a question for you about the book. Why do you only choose to go out with boys who can talk you out in taxis it’s only the way you get there how can you tell if you like him by the way he takes you out.
So take my advice go out with the boy but only if you have talked to him and you’re sure you like him.
Yours Faithfully
Elsie Whelan
Fendalton 8052
Christchurch
19th July, 2007
Dear Tania,
I am Elsie from Fendalton Open Air Primary School
And I read the busker and I really think you need a reality check you’re not the queen of England if you were you wouldn’t be here.
You are going to miss out on a great boy and you won’t realise because you didn’t give him a chance.
You only care about going out in taxis and getting manicures.
You should start treating people the way you want to be treated because at this point I agree with the boy in the story go jump in a lake. Maybe next time you should talk to him first because you might actually like them and if they can’t afford to take you out in taxi’s then that’s your loss!!!!
I have a question for you about the book. Why do you only choose to go out with boys who can talk you out in taxis it’s only the way you get there how can you tell if you like him by the way he takes you out.
So take my advice go out with the boy but only if you have talked to him and you’re sure you like him.
Yours Faithfully
Elsie Whelan
Tuesday, July 17, 2007
Term 3 Goal - Nature Smart
This term I would like to start really start being cautious of nature. I will do this by sticking to
the pathways throughout the school
I will know I have done this when:
I will be recycling before I know it.
the pathways throughout the school
I will know I have done this when:
I will be recycling before I know it.
Term 3 Goal-Focus
School Goals:
I would really like to be more focused on my school work until the end of the year because I haven’t been lately.
I will know I have done this when:
I will know what’s going on in the class & I will be on task all the time 24/7.
I would really like to be more focused on my school work until the end of the year because I haven’t been lately.
I will know I have done this when:
I will know what’s going on in the class & I will be on task all the time 24/7.
Term 3 Goal-Homework
Personal Goals:
I am now going to start doing my homework in a quit place by myself so I can get it all done but don’t rush it because then I can go and play and not having to worry about my homework.
I will know I have done this when:
All my homework will be done nice and early and I will
be happy about my strategy.
I am now going to start doing my homework in a quit place by myself so I can get it all done but don’t rush it because then I can go and play and not having to worry about my homework.
I will know I have done this when:
All my homework will be done nice and early and I will
be happy about my strategy.
Term 3 Goal- Friends
School & Personal Goals:
1.This term I would like to be as friendly as can be and when people are talking bad things about each other I will say don’t talk to me talk to whom you are upset with.
I will know I have done this when:
People will be happy with everyone and they won’t have to say bad things behind their backs.
1.This term I would like to be as friendly as can be and when people are talking bad things about each other I will say don’t talk to me talk to whom you are upset with.
I will know I have done this when:
People will be happy with everyone and they won’t have to say bad things behind their backs.
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